All Comments on 'Giggles in the Sun'

Beautiful work. I loved the rhythm and character development. Excellent pacing. I could really feel the tension between your female characters, made me want to know more about them. Visually appealing and a good quick read. Thanks for such a refined command of vocabulary. I can tell that you spent time editing before posting -- and this is appreciated. Made me want to watch from a nearby sand dune. From one literotica writer across the pond to another, please keep up the good work.