by EdgeoftheAbyss
I don't like way you portrayed Gilligan here. he's a great character and I want him to get some action with the girls and not be portrayed like an idiot or skipper's bitch. I skimmed the whole story, disappointed with how you wrote Gilligan. Sorry.
Is written as though the cast of the OC are his passengers. Believe it or not, there were (and are) actually fairly innocent girls, most rich people aren't sexual deviants, most sailors aren't bisexual, etc.