All Comments on 'Girlfriend in the Zombie Apocalypse Day 03'

by nickamano

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 9 years ago
Wow. A very good story and I'm impressed with it.

My only complaint is that Jay said he had morals and so far hasn't shown any. Next, if he has condoms, why not fuck her pussy? If she been ass fucked for months or years or whatever, she should be able to accommodate Jays cock quite easily and lastly, we were told that Dean sported an enormous dick, so why would Jay think otherwise?

Still 5 stars!

nickamanonickamanoover 9 years agoAuthor

Okay here goes, Jay's morals are from his own perspective and are measured (by him) in relation to Dean's and the scavengers' he has come into contact with since the outbreak. It's all relative really.

Emily didn't want him having vaginal intercourse with her, she wanted to be punished for giving up on her memory of Dean so quickly, so condoms or not, anal it is.

Jay's erect penis is thicker in girth that Dean's was, maybe Dean's was longer but thinner... Maybe I just got a bit over-excited and carried away while writing... Erm... I'll let you decide which. :P

Thanks for the feedback and thanks for the five stars.

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