All Comments on 'Girls Watching Guys Ch. 03'

Well writen, and, I think, quite inventive.

Seems like something that could, possibly, happen, vis-a-vis almost all other i/t stories I've read here. Hope the toothbrush isn't put back to use *shudder*.

I did a story search and started reading pt 3 of this to see if you could write. It was nice to see someone ELSE have command of the English language; your spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are very good. I was willing to read through the urinating bit because I thought it fit with the story. When it came to the exam portion, I thought to myself, "The author has to be a male who's at least 50 because no, I repeat NO, teenager is going to give himself a medical exam!" When the brother started sticking a toothbrush up his ass that's when I called "bull shit" and didn't bother to continue. Having a brother sister exhibitionist theme is one thing, but adding urinating, self medical exams, and anal play with a toothbrush is far too much! Get a grip!

It started ok ,,, just got fucking stupid,, who in they`re right fucking mind fucks they`re ass with a toothbrush

I will leave you to your stupid dream; there are much better authors

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It started ok ,,, just got fucking stupid,, who in they`re right fucking mind fucks they`re ass with a toothbrush

I will leave you to your stupid dream; there are much better authors

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You just broke pretty much every writing rule concerning spelling, hyphenation, capitalization and punctuation. Fabulous work. Consequently, I feel you're not qualified to claim if someone is a better author or not. Have a wonderful day.

it is just told as it happened, it is not so easy to reach the p-gland ya know, but it sure feels good when you do. This was a very factual account of the whole thing, I was there, and it happened as unlikely as it may seem, I was the other party to this whole hot dam thing. Just me the other one in your unbelievable story. HUGWUW!

Why am I reading the main story again and again

Hmm I am so glad I can talk 2 u now!

Look forward to being better then ever!

So have you found any of my stories?

I wish you would elaborate more on that story. Or possibly her walking in the room while he's masturbating fucking his ass and she joins him

I wonder if it might be better if she were a friend or family friend of the sister