All Comments on 'Girls Watching Guys Ch. 03'

I wonder if it might be better if she were a friend or family friend of the sister

I wish you would elaborate more on that story. Or possibly her walking in the room while he's masturbating fucking his ass and she joins him

So have you found any of my stories?

Look forward to being better then ever!

Hmm I am so glad I can talk 2 u now!

Why am I reading the main story again and again

it is just told as it happened, it is not so easy to reach the p-gland ya know, but it sure feels good when you do. This was a very factual account of the whole thing, I was there, and it happened as unlikely as it may seem, I was the other party to this whole hot dam thing. Just me the other one in your unbelievable story. HUGWUW!

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It started ok ,,, just got fucking stupid,, who in they`re right fucking mind fucks they`re ass with a toothbrush

I will leave you to your stupid dream; there are much better authors

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You just broke pretty much every writing rule concerning spelling, hyphenation, capitalization and punctuation. Fabulous work. Consequently, I feel you're not qualified to claim if someone is a better author or not. Have a wonderful day.

It started ok ,,, just got fucking stupid,, who in they`re right fucking mind fucks they`re ass with a toothbrush

I will leave you to your stupid dream; there are much better authors

I did a story search and started reading pt 3 of this to see if you could write. It was nice to see someone ELSE have command of the English language; your spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are very good. I was willing to read through the urinating bit because I thought it fit with the story. When it came to the exam portion, I thought to myself, "The author has to be a male who's at least 50 because no, I repeat NO, teenager is going to give himself a medical exam!" When the brother started sticking a toothbrush up his ass that's when I called "bull shit" and didn't bother to continue. Having a brother sister exhibitionist theme is one thing, but adding urinating, self medical exams, and anal play with a toothbrush is far too much! Get a grip!

Well writen, and, I think, quite inventive.

Seems like something that could, possibly, happen, vis-a-vis almost all other i/t stories I've read here. Hope the toothbrush isn't put back to use *shudder*.