All Comments on 'Given Away'

Nicely written first piece. Thanks for putting yourself and your story out there.

I'm not a fan of this kind of mind fuck, seems petty and mean hearted to me. Guess I don't trust, 'cause I woulda been outa there. But, that's me. ;)

Hope the mind fuck fans step up and out for you.

... another fine story! This was most enjoyable - thank you for posting it for us and I hope you will write and share much more with us. Welcome and please have five stars.

Agree with FA_JF, I would have told them where to stick their juvenile little game and left.

This story was hot! Wish I had been the delivery boy!

Crap either way. Both show he cares and trusts her very little. She is right to not trust him. BTW not well written either.

Not my cup of tea at all.