All Comments on 'Gold Peony and The Sinuous Wife Ch. 02'

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DenkkarDenkkarover 10 years ago
Catfight!

I don't normally go for this stuff, but it's surprisingly entertaining. I especially like how back story is woven into the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
OOOO

Nice story love to read more in the future!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Very well written. I can't wait for the next part.

JNMCJNMCalmost 8 years ago
Hello there

Any chance of coming back this one sometime?

PrevertOnePrevertOnealmost 8 years agoAuthor
Might Be Awhile.

It could be awhile on this JNMC. I'm back to Monkey Mind on stories (can't focus on one), and I'm dealing with certain life issues that leave me little time to work on writing at the moment. Thanks for reading and I hope you'll be patient :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Left Hanging

Great so far, but don't keep it just hanging there finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Loved it, left me wanting more, the characters are very convincing.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.