All Comments on 'Golden Keeper Ch. 03'

Great start, hope to see more of you.

The story is good you have an interesting concept and are working it quite well. However Please find an editor your spelling and word errors are really spoiling it. You are capable of turning out an excellent tale if you just take time to put in the extra bit of work. Keep writing.

A good chapter. Tho there were spelling errors, i don't find they detracted me from the flow of the story, but then i have years of experience reading work by people with dyslexia but others might find it hard going. PJ xx