All Comments on 'Gotcha Ch. 01'

Wow this has endless avenues, well written, but I now need more! Youve left us in limbo, can't wIt to read the next chapter.

this is a real change, a much darker, headier brew. Your writing is very good. Although this story is not to my taste, I'm sure it will please many others. Keep writing!

A great opening chapter, i can not stay and write to much as i need to read the next chapter asap.

Well written, but brutal and that detracts from the work in my opinion. Granted I realize this is one of your earlier works, and it is obvious in your later stories that you learned d/s relationships don't need to be so rough and horrific.

There's little more to say. You can obviously write well but you're wasting your talent on this kind of dross.

Brutal, yes, nasty, yes, but Gotcha is also my top "selling" story by a considerable margin. Go figure.

XXX

Lisa

"Well, get on with it then, and try to be a little sensuous, you're supposed to be gratefully worshiping, not pecking away like some sort of demented bird."

I spit my drink reading that line and laughed so damned hard! Great story so far!

much more B+D than lesbian, at least at this point, but interesting enough to pursue another chapter