All Comments on 'Graduating Amanda'

by nimbushalo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great beginning, but

The story started great, had a better middle and then it just died at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Erotic

I am sure you know that in this country and most of Europe,sex between first cousins is not incest,in fact you can marry your first cousin.THe story was nevertheless erotic and a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
so-so

could have used more background and a much better and longer end. the end really really sucked i would have been passable if you had posted a second chapter but as is it sucks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
kind of a waste of time

no real background or character development and no end means you wasted your time and ours either finish it properly or delete it.

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