by nimbushalo
The story started great, had a better middle and then it just died at the end.
I am sure you know that in this country and most of Europe,sex between first cousins is not incest,in fact you can marry your first cousin.THe story was nevertheless erotic and a good read.
could have used more background and a much better and longer end. the end really really sucked i would have been passable if you had posted a second chapter but as is it sucks.
no real background or character development and no end means you wasted your time and ours either finish it properly or delete it.