by NYCbbwSUB
Hey NYC.
I gave you a four because I think the story needs a tweak to reach a five, Ok, it's better than what I could write if I wrote. have a goodone.dan
She needs to be made a true whore, being sent to a hotel where a stranger whips her, and uses her and then gives her money to take back to her Dad.
Keep getting those old men to service all her well used hole, but how about a old woman and make your slut daughter service all of her holes while being serviced by on og you.
...NYC this story can run and run...or at least till the writer gets bored......and will be watching for further additions though think that sometimes she needs a 'good wapping' as doubt the grandpa could cum that often.
Don't leave us in suspense. We want to know what happens to the slut on Saturday.
Pleas please finish the story, i want to see what happens to her on her big night, keep up the good work, cheers
omg, this story was so hot, got me so wet. please write the next chapter, cant wait to see what daddy and grandpa have planned for her on saturday.
Please continue this!! I totally understand how she feels and craves those things.