All Comments on 'Grandpa Owns Her Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
tweak

Hey NYC.

I gave you a four because I think the story needs a tweak to reach a five, Ok, it's better than what I could write if I wrote. have a goodone.dan

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Whore

She needs to be made a true whore, being sent to a hotel where a stranger whips her, and uses her and then gives her money to take back to her Dad.

thekiwicharmerthekiwicharmerover 17 years ago
Try a Woman with Her

Keep getting those old men to service all her well used hole, but how about a old woman and make your slut daughter service all of her holes while being serviced by on og you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
FUCKIN HOT

THIS MADE ME SO HOT! I LOVED IT! KEEP WRIING!

storm42storm42about 17 years ago
.....get grandpa a pony whip

...NYC this story can run and run...or at least till the writer gets bored......and will be watching for further additions though think that sometimes she needs a 'good wapping' as doubt the grandpa could cum that often.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More

Don't leave us in suspense. We want to know what happens to the slut on Saturday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Pleas please finish the story, i want to see what happens to her on her big night, keep up the good work, cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
latina bbw

omg, this story was so hot, got me so wet. please write the next chapter, cant wait to see what daddy and grandpa have planned for her on saturday.

snorkie1979snorkie1979almost 6 years ago
Fat slut

Great story,who doesn't love a fat young sub fuck slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please continue this!! I totally understand how she feels and craves those things.

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