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All Comments on 'Granny Moves on'

by BebeEversJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love it

Great story! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lovely story!

This is a great story. There are a few misspelled words and some run-on sentences (a good editor could help with that). I look forward to the next part.

mature_a100mature_a100over 14 years ago
Enjoyed

Enjoyed this yarn, now off to read some more of your story's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it

Great storie. I hope it continues for a while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story

Very nice story liked it alot

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Average . . . No better than average . . . Keep practicing with part two

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