All Comments on 'Guess What I Saw? Ch. 03'

I can't wait for part four.

Thanks, Albertaboy. More is in the works!

Really good... Great Story , looking forward to chapter 4.

One of the best well written pieces of erotica I've read anywhere. Dare I mention Terry Southern, Henry Miller and V Nabakov? Well done!

Thanks for the comment! I appreciate you taking the time.

very well crafted; particularly like Monica's growing lustful experimentation-her excitement, lust and nervousness all wrapped up in a great melange or emotion.

Only negative-the coyness about the time and having to stop..not necessary at all.

I appreciate your comments! Excellent feedback. Thank you!

MAn you can tease your readers...

Thank you, Sandy Monroe. I enjoy teasing a bit.