All Comments on 'Gym Membership Ch. 01'

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ThisWillEndBadlyThisWillEndBadlyalmost 14 years ago
Great start!

This is a really hot story so far, and I can wait to see what the next chapter holds in store.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Welcome back...

...after your 6 year hiatus.

Voted '5'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Aahhhhhh!!!!

Aaaaah!!! Noooooooo!!! Finish it!!!! Pleaseeeee? I want her to get out...then again I want him to find her D: I neeeeeeeeeeed to know the ending pleeeeease!!!!

crystal_clear1000crystal_clear1000almost 14 years agoAuthor
More is definately on its way!

I know it's been a long while since I've posted, but not to worry this story has already progressed a great deal more already. And Kircanos and I still have plans for several more chapters to come. It is just a matter of how long it will take me to combine our notes and then clean them up so they read cleanly for you all. I promise to post more in the GYM Membership series as soon as I can. Meanwhile, thanks for the feedback. It's great to hear all of your thoughts!!

2ndchance2ndchanceover 13 years ago
WOW

Very hot and sexy, i love the subtle hints of her being a bbw, my mind is really working overtime with pictures of a lovley bbw with a soft tummy and a nice ass being forced to enjoy her pain.... Please continue......

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