All Comments on 'Hall Lust'

Great story. I enjoyed the "real" quality to it - the flirting and anxious emotions, the twin feelings of friendship and lust.

Keep writing more such works :-)

one of the best stories i've read. very convincing and not fake at all, congrats!

I thought that the story was really good, with a good plot, and of course the build up between friends, moving into the next realm... good work!