by LolitaBonita
I thought that the story was really good, with a good plot, and of course the build up between friends, moving into the next realm... good work!
one of the best stories i've read. very convincing and not fake at all, congrats!
Great story. I enjoyed the "real" quality to it - the flirting and anxious emotions, the twin feelings of friendship and lust.
Keep writing more such works :-)