All Comments on 'Halo Ch. 06'

there's nothing that i can say that i haven't already said to describe how much i love this series. i check for updates everyday. well done.

I would really love to see Ren/Gabe and Janey together....I have never really like the cop boy friend....I look forward to your next chapters.

Thanks for the new chapter (and so soon after the last - very nice), Jane and Ren are just awsome together and I hope that Adam will be out of the picture soon. Even her family sees that Ren is way better for her. Hope she goes on the tour to the restaurants with Ren, finally says goodbye to Adam and I can't wait to find out at what trouble Adam is at work.

Just get rid of him soon and finish this story up soon because I can't wait to read the end.

Wonderful Chapter at least her brother robbie finally came to his senses about adam....can't wait to read more!!!

so ren is a chef..super cool! i hope everyhting works out for him and janey. more please!

I LOOOVE this series but the chapters are always waaay tooooo short!! I love the fact that maybe the family is starting to see Ren's not so bad after all (maybe he can cook for her family sometime - hey maybe they could all get together including Brad and Tanaya) and I love the fact that Janey is getting closer to Tanaya. She needs a girlfriend. AND I hope she and Nicky go with Ren fpr a week. AND I hope Ren rents the house Brent and Matty had so that he can be close to Brad but he and Janey can be alone. AND have I said how much I love this story??? Please post another chapter soon. :)

Okay, I am loving where this story is going. Finally looks like Adam is going to get his, the asswipe! He has taken advantage of all Janey/Sky's vulnerablities since he met her and ethically he was so wrong to get involved with a kidnap/rape victim when he was the investigating officer. Keep 'em coming, I can't wait to find out how this ends up. I have been reading along since Stolen.

love the story~please let Ren and Janey be together~

for sharing this epic story....it should be a book.

post another chapter soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. I want to know what Robbie has to say to his father about Adam and how they feel about Ren. I hope Janie goes with Ren for the week. Please don't keep us waiting much longer.

Please hurry and post something soon. We're going through withdrawals! HAHA Just can't get enough of Ren! :)

please write more soon, i just come by to check and see if you've written anything new.

Please write more. . .

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come on....i so waiting for the next chapter!

moreeee nowww!!!

do we have to beg to get another chapter? Please please please please please add one soon.

we all know that janey is going to ed up with ren so why not just have them end up together without any more buildup i mean you might as well be waving a flag with the ending embroidered on it

Such a shame some people are in such a hurry and want to cut the rest out. I for one am enjoying the story development, it would make for a very short story other wise.

It was so sweet that 'Tanaya tried bonding with Janey over how great sex with Brad (her lover, one of Janey's rapists) was. In Stolen Brad decided to have sex with Sky because he and Ren thought she looked hot when they found her tied up by Wilson. They did stop Wilson since she was Hawk's 'property'.