All Comments on 'Hands on Training Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loved it!

Great story. I was waiting for you to start adding some drama to the story but I'm glad you ended it the way you did. It was a sweet, romantic story without any added things.

pouncingtigresspouncingtigressalmost 17 years ago
finally!

What a great story! Sweet romance, hot sex - what more do you want... :) Definitely one of the better romances on this site!

Good luck on your class and a speedy recovery for your leg!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 16 years ago
Lovely

I would have loved more chapter but this was a good ending.

eagleman13148eagleman13148over 15 years ago
BEAUTIFUL

ABSOLOUTLY BEAUTIFUL STORY.....GRET WRITING...KEEPS YOU INTENSE AND WAITING..NOTY JUST ALL ABOUT THE SEX....GREAT JOB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You really really need to learn to proof read or find someone to do it for you

He lifted her in his arms and carried her into her bedroom, placing her gently down gently.

The entire story was filled with this kind of sentence

Pretty damn gently I would say lmao

Sorry gave it A deuce and that was for the overall story

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