All Comments on 'Handy Man'

I have received feedback saying this is a flat story due to the lack of dialogue. It was deleiberately written WITHOUT Dialogue. I made that as a conscious decision.

But please, if you wish to email me with disparaging comments, at least have the balls to add your email to the message so I can respond to you.

I like the way you described the story & it was really good WITHOUT the dialogues. I do agree that dialogues do give a life to the characters & also to the story, but this story didn't need. I liked it, it was HOT. Thanks for the story.

I found it so good I didn't notice the lack of dialogue... Normally it is better with dialogue, but in this case it stood without.

Just write as you feel. I enjoyed your story, do write for yourself and many will enjoy.

Thank you all, as you may have guessed, i do not mind negative comments, just please have the balls to admit who you are.

I actually liked that there was no dialogue. So often dialogue in erotica becomes cheesy and contrived. The communication and chemistry comes across nicely. Well done!

I loved this story. It has some heart to it. Like you could turn it into a love story.

delicious. very sensual and evocative writing.

are rapidly becoming one of my stars lassie. Superb writing, only tinily marred by little errors a good editor could easliy sort for you. Take it from one who has tried: one CANNOT edit one's own stories!

Many many thanks. Yes I admit editing is not my strong point. I get too impatient with myself to do it properly for short stories. My bad. Hope to be more stories up in the future.