All Comments on 'Happily Kidnapped Ch. 04'

What a waste of time....

That was a sad ending.it was not "pure crap".thank u for sharing.

That kinda sorta sucked Major Laser ass cheeks.

I enjoyed the story up until the last two paragraphs. As a writer myself I am beyond curious as to what happened to make it end so suddenly and harshly. Really upset over the ending.

The ending bro. I was not expecting that. OHHHHhdamn

nice story tho