All Comments on 'Happy Birthday!'

by Jack123456

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hope it continues?

So many stories are started and continued with like No. 2 & No. 3 and Etc. and then all of a sudden the story stops, with no conclision. They're just left hanging in mid air. Like Accidental encounter, and Class Reunion and it's sequel Reunion Ch. 2 Which could have continued on. I hope this is not one of those stories that just stops.

I know one must use their imagination. But when there is room and a story is left with a continuing end, Please don't stop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Short, but a Very Good Start

Your story is very good, but a bit short for my taste to real enjoy it. I hope you will continue with the story, preferably many chapters, and I'd suggest a bit longer than your start. Keep it going!

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