All Comments on 'Happy Happy Birthday, Baby Ch. 02'

Your love life must be dull.

this is not a story for kids spice it up with details lots of em

...hot...steamy....NASTY

The story had alot of potential, but frankly, you write it as if you're embarrassed to be writing it. Put more detail into it next time. Details are good. And if it is something that embarrasses you to write about, then don't write about it, try something else.

I"m sorry for those who's comments were mean and ignorant. The "More pathetic" comment wasn't called for. If someone doesnt like that kind of thing, then they shouldnt be reading it..simple as that.

A cock and a cunt...are made for fucking,and God called that "good". Societal dogma can go fuck itself!

it's a little too bland

I liked it...:) for its straight-forward naivete, innocence and simplicity....:)

It is, consequently, one dimentional though... but if you designed it to be that way, then you succeeded...:)

It is sweet, and slightly - naughty...:)

got me horny! keep writing.