All Comments on 'Hard To Learn # 501'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep Writing

Get revenge on this motherfucker. Then throw the fucking cunt out too. don't even think about the fucking twins. When they are born, throw them all out, Lisa included. Take your other kids and have them DNAd to make sure they are thee husbands. If not , throw them out in the fucking street with Lisa. Take the ones that are yours and leave the state. don't give the motherfucker one god damned dime. Tell the fucking slut to let the niggers support her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
kill them all

get your revenge ..bomb that building ... kick that slut out ... take your other kids and just leave ... after killing jerome very slowly... what a crock

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Ok

Well written can't wait for the ending, should be full of revenge. The race of the people involved here dose not matter.. This is still a sick thing for anyone to do to women.. or anyone for that matter. Drugs, blackmail ruinning a family its just a bad way to treat people. This story shows us the worst

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Ok

Well written can't wait for the ending, should be full of revenge. The race of the people involved here dose not matter.. This is still a sick thing for anyone to do to women.. or anyone for that matter. Drugs, blackmail ruinning a family its just a bad way to treat people. This story shows us the worst

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
PUNISH ALL of THEM!!

Teach them that winner is called the one who wins the last game. Somehow make their lives miserable and have them realize that what they have done was the worst mistake. What you will do to the cheating wife is up to you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Time For a Sheet Party

Sounds like it's time for a good white sheet party for a bunch of fucking niggers. Nothing like a good cross and fire to keep'em in line. LOL!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow! What a bunch of racist

How people react, its only a story. I'm sure its someones fantasy of a situation. Why get all worked up and make vile threats of What to Do?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Listen to Yourself

I don't know what is funnier; the wild imagination of the writer or the dumb comments left by the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
50

The story does straddle a stange line of farce and obsurdity, but I guess it succeeds at what it sets out to do.

The idea of a systematic breeding of whitewomen reminds me of another author, I think the name was stormbringer, that had a whole series built around that idea. It'd belong more in the science fiction category more than anything, but it would be strange to explore the idea of a future where they succeed at something like that...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
CLASSLESS RACIST IDIOT HACK

enough said

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Pre Obama-era, now dated racism?

Somehow I doubt it, but only future submissions will tell...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

She deserves everything that happened to her and I'm not a black guy. She cheated on her husba't give in.nd and continued. She's a whore and her husband should kick her out and let them send the video's to everyone. I don't feel sorry one bit for her. She wanted and enjoyed everything until it got bad. I just hope her husband doesn't give in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sesame Street.

You must have missed the episodes of Sesame Street where they discussed spelling,grammar,and punctuation. I'm severely dyslexic,and even I spotted most of those glaring errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Dave69

Great story. About time I read a story that is more realistic. Please make the revenge powerful. It's the husbands I feel sorry for. It's good that a woman stands for herself. Yes it shouldn't get that for but having realised her mistake she does want other women to fall for that blackman bulls hit. Can't wait for next ch.

chloelovesfurchloelovesfuralmost 4 years ago
chloe

Found it as horny as hell x

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