by simply_cyn
Dear cyn,
Firstly, I was very pleased with this story, congratulations on a fantastic read. The girl how she responds is well written, and there is a definite feeling of tense sensuality.
Well done once more.
Sincerely,
Lestat's Casper
That was so well written and so incredibly erotic! Sheesh! Just wonderful. I loved the connection between the two characters and how in tune they are with each other. It had great flow as well. Hot stuff.