All Comments on 'Haven's Wood Ch. 03'

U better finish this damn story and not leave me hanging bc I love it.

Don't leave us hanging too long lol. I know real life, vacation time etc but give us more as soon as you can please.

Don't leave us hanging :(

I hope she puts up a solid attempt at escape. James is... intense.

I agree James is tense and bold. please co tinue. Can u make the chapters a little lo her though

James is back to thinking with his smaller head....

Next she gets to learn the whole village is were. Not to mention once she stops to think about the wolf in the woods being James. Anger, embarrassment, arousal-combustible mix.

Keep it coming. :)

I love that one word "Home". Bring on the next chapter, please.. :)

Love love love it!!!! An alpha who isn't scared or skittish, but balanced!! Yay. Keep going.

5 stars- Love this story.

5 stars!! Can't wait for the next update!!

I adore this story! I'm excited to find out where you are going with this story, and I can't wait for more! James is deliciously dominant, which is always a big plus! Love that you update in a timely manner. and your fast updating does not interfere with how far you have developed the story plot. Please continue to write this story! Thank you!! <3

This is a great story and i would love more than anything to see this to the end! Please continue!!

I love this chapter and adore James so I hope she doesn't try to escape!

Please write fast, I can hardly wait for the next chapter!! Wonder job writing!!

Oh, you are such a teaser...LOL Better not keep us hanging too long. Love it

great stuff. Other than a few mistakes that are easily fixed (try to get someone to go over it before you submit), I really like it. You do a great job of making the emotions of the characters come off the page. You really sense the strength of the emotions involved. Mmmm I don't think I would have been fighting it as much as she is :) I look forward to more!

Ready for the next part....

Too short!

Great Story keep it up

Way too short....

The story isn't over yet, so how do you know if it is too short? This section of the story is done. If you grown up enough to read this, you can decide to read more than one bedtime story.

WAY TO SHORT,,a good few minutes read,might wait for the entire story to come out,if all the chapters are going to be this short,so i can really get into it,,,Keep up the good work,,,,

I love stories about wolves/werewolves, but the Alpha is a bit creepy.

I'm really enjoying this story and was so pleased to see the correct way "dragged" was used in the past tense where I have seen the usage of "drug" to express the past tense of the word drag. That really made my day. My life is sad...oh well.

Anyway the storyline is is grabbing and enjoying the beginning of this couple's pairing. Love is so hard.

Chapters are to short, need to flesh them out more.