by Menderman
Hi Menderman, the way u write is veri realistic & i like the way u gave options on how the story will go...
Hope u could keep on writing, especially on Hayli maybe could include more ppl or write a story on how Hayli was kidnapped, tied up & raped by the Prof again..
I love your take on the parallel outcomes/butterfly effect theory in your story please keep it up. Can't wait for "Hayli's Sliding Door – Option 2C – Sarah, I'm curious as to how Sarah will handle things when given her turn at the wheel.