by bi_cherrypie
Hot one! Story was an excellent read! This fantasy never gets old.
Your words made it beleivable!
Thanks for writing!
Nice start of a story! I hope there's more!
The transition from her desire for Ben to her father was sudden, but worked. You did a nice job showing a girl starting to bloom into a sexual woman.
That was a nice beginning. I hope this story continues and just maybe the boss, daddy and daughter will get it on. In fact, this story actually got me hard. Thanks so much.
Very good story beginning, write more...
Does she get pregnant? what about the mother and the boss?
Worth a follow-up to see How far Dad and Daughter go with being Found Out.
...but other than that, it was a wicked hot start to something good. Something I'd like to see inthe future is a double team on Megan by Daddy and the Boss.
That was awesome! I really like your writing style. Some of your descriptions were honestly unique and new, which was delightfully refreshing! I just wish there was another chapter or two! Heh.
Thanks for writing :)
Truly beautiful... The scene when the father can finally express his taboo love and affection is passionate and lovely! Thank you...
A very abrupt ending to a good plot line. Definitely needs more chapters. How about mom? . . . .