All Comments on 'He Didn't Even Know He Wanted Her'

by bi_cherrypie

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sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Oh yea!

Hot one! Story was an excellent read! This fantasy never gets old.

Your words made it beleivable!

Thanks for writing!

sirsemegasirsemegaabout 14 years ago
Hot!

Nice start of a story! I hope there's more!

The transition from her desire for Ben to her father was sudden, but worked. You did a nice job showing a girl starting to bloom into a sexual woman.

MaitreNuitMaitreNuitabout 14 years ago
Really hot

I'll be waiting for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice beginning

That was a nice beginning. I hope this story continues and just maybe the boss, daddy and daughter will get it on. In fact, this story actually got me hard. Thanks so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I really liked this

Very good story beginning, write more...

Does she get pregnant? what about the mother and the boss?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Deffinately

Worth a follow-up to see How far Dad and Daughter go with being Found Out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Needs some proof reading...

...but other than that, it was a wicked hot start to something good. Something I'd like to see inthe future is a double team on Megan by Daddy and the Boss.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

That was awesome! I really like your writing style. Some of your descriptions were honestly unique and new, which was delightfully refreshing! I just wish there was another chapter or two! Heh.

Thanks for writing :)

bLoner1964bLoner1964almost 7 years ago
Love

Truly beautiful... The scene when the father can finally express his taboo love and affection is passionate and lovely! Thank you...

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Awesome to read the love you put in tis story .

Ii just love this one .WOW !

ToughSailorToughSailor3 months ago

A very abrupt ending to a good plot line. Definitely needs more chapters. How about mom? . . . .

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