by bi_cherrypie
A very abrupt ending to a good plot line. Definitely needs more chapters. How about mom? . . . .
Truly beautiful... The scene when the father can finally express his taboo love and affection is passionate and lovely! Thank you...
That was awesome! I really like your writing style. Some of your descriptions were honestly unique and new, which was delightfully refreshing! I just wish there was another chapter or two! Heh.
Thanks for writing :)
...but other than that, it was a wicked hot start to something good. Something I'd like to see inthe future is a double team on Megan by Daddy and the Boss.
Worth a follow-up to see How far Dad and Daughter go with being Found Out.
Very good story beginning, write more...
Does she get pregnant? what about the mother and the boss?
That was a nice beginning. I hope this story continues and just maybe the boss, daddy and daughter will get it on. In fact, this story actually got me hard. Thanks so much.
Nice start of a story! I hope there's more!
The transition from her desire for Ben to her father was sudden, but worked. You did a nice job showing a girl starting to bloom into a sexual woman.
Hot one! Story was an excellent read! This fantasy never gets old.
Your words made it beleivable!
Thanks for writing!