All Comments on 'He Found Me Ch. 04'

Each chapter gets better. The female character continues to be fleshed out beautifully.

To have "A" perform and obey while on live cam was def a nice touch.

The dialogue was realistic as was the tone.

The author continues to grow and write well.

Well written with nice imagery.

i too enjoy the way these chapters flowed,each one

as well crafted as the previous.the characters are believable,making this story very erotic.

hopefully we will see more of lillygirls work.

Loved, loved, LOVED it!! Great story, great characters...wish I could find my own Cord who loves berries and cream. More, please!

This is a brilliant series of stories. I love the way Cord carries off being a bit loutish and totally charming at the same time. Good job!

See, I totally love this combination of demanding dominance and very vocal lust in a man. He wants her as much as she wants him, which is the way things should be.

I loved the way the author vividly described Nikki's desperate need to receive pleasure . . . so desperate that she cared nothing that others were watching. In fact, she actually fed off it. Wonderfully vivid imagry that made me feel as if I were watching, too.

I died and went to heaven. Highly erotic and creative with the exhibitionism. It was descriptive enough to make me wet.

My god, this story is so damn hot. I love the dominance and submission, how he fucks her and she does what she's told eagerly. Can't wait to read more!

i am so damn wet right now... my dream guy right there!

good story love all the parts :)

Hope to see more stories or a continuation of Cord and Nikki's exploits.