All Comments on 'He Picked The Wrong House'

Did your spell checker broke down? Or did the keys got stuck? You were either missing some alphabets or have addtional in some words. Then certain paragraphs you were either in present tense or past tense. Very distracting. Do be more careful on that in your future submissions.

Unexpected ending. Not really a great hot story but manageable.

Good try though.

SexyBarby:

Mistakes; a few, but still a nice tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I'm so happy i got to read something that satisfied my interests.You rock, keep the stories coming!

I loved the surprise ending that it was your hubby!!

The detail in the actual fucking could have been a little more extensive, but everything else was hot! Great story!

"Did your spell checker broke down?" Are you serious? That question was grammatically incorrect. Criticize yourself before others