All Comments on 'Heart of a Lion Ch. 02'

I just wanted to say I was intrigued by your first chapter and now I'm completely disgusted by the direction you are trying to take this in.

Nice writing but extremely creepy....its hard for me personally to read stories like this so I may be a little hesistant to read chapter 3. If only you could've left the incest out of the story .....made up a different character... I dont know but you do write good! So next story, NO INCEST! :)

The incest thing is just creepy, and appeared without any warning. Not hot at all.

I can be weird about incest as well :P Even writing him as her adopted brother felt weird, I can promise nothing will happen between the twins and Anna won't be in this at all in that way. If people would like, I can write an alternate chap 2 and onwards where Scott doesnt seduce Ella, depending on peoples tastes

Kinda wierd but I remembered Scott was adopted. So he wasn't her biological brother.

Btw Scott was adopted soo there's no incest there ....let the haters hate keep up the good work m8

don'tknow where you're taking the story but would love to stick around to find out.

Keep going!

I completely missed the adoptive brother part in the first chapter.....its still a little weird, but not as much.... Oh and dont rewrite it, its your story dont be discouraged .....youre doing great

Ok, I normally don't comment on stories, even the ones I like so you can take this to heart. Don't change, the direction. Granted, I'm not a fan of the incest thing BUT you did mention the whole adopted thing. Also, if people don't like it tough shit. This website has a bunch of stories for a bunch of different tastes and this little bit of "incest" isn't that major. So, the story I thought was great, it was hot, it had a good transformation description, and it had werewolves. In my opinion, that leads to a good story that I look forward to reading. Keep up the good work

Incest or not this story is amazing. Dont change anything. Keep the technical incest in. It works and I can see hopefully some conflict comeing because of it later on when Scott regains his senses. Also for those who cant handle it gtfo. Its the authors story. he shouldnt have to change anything.

...I check back all the time to see if you've added another chapter.

Please write the next chpt. Maybe in the next chapt.have the mates female and the twins get more mature & have them go camping at that little river or stream where they set up camp and while they're setting up scott is watching them with his friend

I enjoyed your story and gave it 5-stars. I hope you will continue it with the female werewolf turning Arron. well I see as usual, another unfinished story in the nonhuman section. That is my biggest complaint with the Errotic Horror and Nonhuman sections, the high number of unfinished stories.