All Comments on 'Heart of Gold Ch. 05'

I can't wait to see what comes next.

Aww I loved Brendan's story about his uncle!! It's sad and sweet at the same time!!

Pretty please hurry wit th next chapter .the waiting is uuum hard please

I like how the story is going. Brendan and Logan are the greatest. God! I wish I had a Brendan in my life.

This is amazing. It made me cum just reading it. Please write more stories about Logan and Brendan!!! :)

Have enjoyed reading about Brendan & Logan, I do hope there will be more story to read. :)

Please hurry with the rest and no Brendan don't you dare break it off with Audrey that way.. There is so much more that can be explored here love it.. can't wait to see what is next

This REALLY needs a happy ending! Good story. But I hope you're not stopping here.

more please of this fabulous story!!!

I really want to know what happen next... I really wish Logan didn't take the "Job" Rich suggested... Wish for a happy ending soon...

Cried when Arthur was shaking from hunger... It reminded me that my life isn't so bad after all since I'm getting enough to eat,

Please finish this peice, it's got me hooked

Deamon Child...

my seal;, the eclipse...

yet another unfished story. i hate thie site.

I think we're shit out of luck for happy ending or ending at all to this one guys. Too bad. Well I enjoyed what was given to us. As much as I hate 'unfinished' stories this one could probably be pulled off as an ambiguous ending. It's no Great Expectations kind of ambiguous ending but I can live with it.

Besides the grammatical errors the story was fun to read. I enjoy highschool stories. It's like a chance to go back in time.

If I had known it was unfinished I wouldn't have bothered to read it. I hate getting invested in stories, only to be left hanging!

I loved this story shy kid get more confidence that he is worth being loved ! Keep on writing please.