All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 09'

Easily worth 5 stars. Another good chapter to add to a great story.

now we have to deal with sages dad

shudder, not shutter; you shudder with fear; a shutter is something for a window

revel means to enjoy reveal means to disclose

he reveled in the cool night air

This sounds surprisingly familiar to another story I have read on here by doctor wolf. Especially the part where she is scented by other wolves and he has to occasionally stop to let her cum. Please do not steal the work or ideas of other authors.

Loving this story. Keep up the good work.

I don't buy into the plagiarism claim, Dr wolf's version is different/ the circumstances are not the same. A lot of stories have similar ways of welcoming a new member into a pack.

You get better with each chapter. Waiting is hard but well worth it.

I am very familiar with dr. wolf's story. This story is not the same. I don't know how many times you've read that story, but I've read it at least ten times. Just because some things may seem familise does not mean this story isn't an original idea. Wolves like dogs scent each other by smelling thier privates. It makes sense for werewolves to do the same thing. Whitesabertooth also had a scene depicting a similar event Did you accuse her of plagiarism? You are making accusations without cause. Just about every werewolf story I have read has something similar to the others. It's the nature of the genre. Next time think before you accuse someone of stealing. You could ruin a person's reputation that way. You should apologize.

Quite good but you have a few flaws

1. Fix your (not you're) spelling and grammar, and maybe get an editor... The mistakes are very distracting and make me lose focus on the story

2. Kaine saying 'babe' seems pretty cliche

3. It was very weird when catie got fucked in front of the whole pack, let alone sniffing her muff.

But keep writing i would love to see what comes next if you can apply only even one of these points, it would make quite a difference.

I really love your story...please continue (: I even saved a short cut to my phone so I could see if you had a new chapter out easier

I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon.

Hi there I do a lot of reading and this one is one of my newest favorites. looking forward to seeing more of your stories .thank you

YES! DIE FUCKER!!!

Sorry. I got really into this story.

There were a few mistakes with spelling and word choice, but they were just those minor errors that slip through when one is caught up in the flow of a great story.

Seriously though. This story was amazing. Maybe it's because I can relate to Catie so much, but I couldn't stop reading and am really looking forward to the last chapter. Thank you so much for your work.