All Comments on 'Hearts Upon the Sea Ch. 05A'

Such an emotional scene you drew for Kayla's death. It was hard to imagine what that would be like for her mom to watch her die in such an awful way. Hope to see another chapter soon. Still hoping to learn more about the necklace and what it does to cause such severe pain for the wearer, how Kayla is caught in it and does she have a consciousness within it?

you know what you are doing, this was brutal. It took so long for this next chapter, that I am worried you may have screwed up. I hope I am wrong...

new chapter plz????

new chapter plz????

can u plz finish this story plzzz

Nice story

Hey there all, for everyone who is enjoying this you can look forward to chapter 5B and chapter 6 within the next 3-7 days, I am currently half way done with chapter 5B: His Life... So hang on because they excitement, the sex, and the drama is about to get hotter!