All Comments on 'Heat'

Thank you.

but with such pain!

I see it's been five years since your last story on Literotica. I hope it's not five years before the next one!

I really really loved it. I'm definitely reading it again when Mommy is allowing me to cum!

Very well written. Thank you.

Thank you all so much for your kind comments and votes! It's such a thrill to know that my little story excited so many of you.

thing I followed a link on a thread. I didn't think it was going to be my thing and the subject matter wasn't, but the quality of your writing grabbed me immediately and your description was very compelling...you're a very evocative writer...excellent

Thank you janeyl. It's really good to hear that you liked without it being to your usual taste. I'm also always interested to hear how women feel about my work. I think women tend to be more discerning than men. I'd love to hear your thoughts on my other work.

First listened to your audio stories recently and enjoyed them so much I decided to read your written work. Really love your writing style - sexy and a bit gritty. Really well done. Hope you keep writing as I will be looking to read more of your work. Thank you for sharing it.