All Comments on 'Heat Ch. 03'

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NightlyWonderNightlyWonderalmost 18 years ago
Please more!

This definitely needs to be continued indefinitely :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The End?

Please tell me this isn't the end!

This is fantastic story so-far - passionate and full-on.

I agree that this bad puppy needs to be smacked with a rolled-up newspaper!

Leaving a lady with a broken heart and a broken door deserves some serious payback...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So sad

Is this how the story ends? With him running out? Tss.. that puppy needs to be neuthered!

SpacewalkerSpacewalkerabout 18 years ago
WOW

amazing!!....please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MORE!

please right more this story is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More

I need Ch 4! This is so hot. The story is great. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yes Please!

Please write more of this story, I really can't wait to see what comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beastly.

Very good beginning middle and end.

LakotaMoonLakotaMoonover 18 years ago
Part 4?

Is there any chance for you to continue this tale? Please!! Write on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I AGREE!!

OMG.... I really love this story. By all means please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yes!!

freaking amazing!!....please continue...i cant wait to read what happens next!!

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