All Comments on 'Heaven Is A Secret Chamber'

This has a much better outcome than the final snuff. Now our hero must revisit his plight again and again.

The lack of certainty is itself a torture and accidents happen...Rick

This story is a classic case of a simple idea being overwritten. This senario could happen very easily in any town, in any country. To think that modern women would pay money for a symbolic hanging is IMHO, ludicrous. For the most part this story would seem to come from a newbie to the BDSM scene, where fantasy and real life separate as quickly as an adolescents cum whilst reading Penthouse letters....LOL

This was your most outstanding story! And given your body of work, that's quite an achievement. Well done.

What a waste of time

Thanks for taking the time to read my first effort; you're a bit late with the comment!

Happy days!

Obviously unrealistic but as a fantasy it works. Towards the end you start to lose track of what time of day it is and how bound up the prisoner is, but that could easily be rectified.

BTW it's odd that you said some other commenter was "late" with their comment.. do you really think any serious author regards anyone discovering his/her work as "late"?

The tale you read was my first ever effort; I am aware of those shortcomings and try to improve as I go, but do tend to get carried away at times!

The comment re 'late' is in respect of a gentleman who made similar comments re any of my work as soon as it was published, then started to add comments to older work when I didn't bite - the comments all being too similar to be a random anonymous comment. I of course hope, that all more recent joiners to the site will get something from my earlier efforts, good or bad. Thanks for the review.

Sputnik 57

Broadmore, in a nice safe rubber room along with the other nutters.

Fuck, you are one sick cunt!

PS don't bother to reply.