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Anonymousabout 9 years agoEditing needed
I really like this, but you keep switching from first person to third person, sometimes in the same paragraph - she, me, I...their, our. You really need to fix this, because your story is good!
TheBlackMothabout 9 years agoAuthorThank you
You are right about the switching in POV. Fixed this error and am awating the update to be posted by admin. Thanks for reading!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoMore please
I would love to read more of Pilar and Jans. Please continue this.
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