All Comments on 'Held Captive Ch. 01'

I loved this story! It was so erotic and the way you had the young girl awaken to her sexuality was very well written. I can't wait for the next part.

Great beginning but will continue onto next part and see what happens to her and her granny.

Very hot Stacy,

You made their tryst very sexy - from rebellion to submission to her own desires.

Loved it,

Jack

very sexy story,thanx for turning me on to this site.speaking of turn on your stories always turn me on,wish you were unattached.keep up the good work,this keeps your readers up!lol MIKE {mikealot}

Far from realistic