All Comments on 'Helping a Friend'

Isn't she supposed to be your "college girlfriend"?

It wqs still a horny story - and I loved it! Could imagine myself in there - what a treat to be taken by two young ladies!!

Nice, but what does this do with cuckolding?

you start the story as girlfrend and end it with wife

Something you might try is reading your work backward. That will help you catch a lot of errors and even awkward phrasings