All Comments on 'Helping a Friend'

you start the story as girlfrend and end it with wife

Something you might try is reading your work backward. That will help you catch a lot of errors and even awkward phrasings

Nice, but what does this do with cuckolding?

It wqs still a horny story - and I loved it! Could imagine myself in there - what a treat to be taken by two young ladies!!

Isn't she supposed to be your "college girlfriend"?