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Click hereSheffield looked at her and smiled weakly.
"What?" she asked.
He snorted. "I don't think I've ever seen anyone as beautiful as you look right now."
What excellent writing. Well done characters and dialog, no suspensions of belief. How have I missed your work all these years?
Chilley
Loved the ending!! The timing and mood setting were a perfect set-up for the punch line. (no pun intended) I chuckled aloud.
I'm off now to read more of your submissions.
Keep up the good work.
You write really well, I'm off to read more of your stories. Good work!