- BDSM
- Hers For Life Ch. 08
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I didn't even want to play, not everyone was, but a rather large girl, who was very nice and was the life of the party, very social and happy, wanted to play, but couldn't find a partner.
She came up to me, sitting off to the side and said, "I bet we'll be the naked ones, because I suck, but I'm cool with it if you are."
I was going to decline, but Beth yelled I would play from across the camp.
Then she made it so we would play each other first, and even laughed hard when someone gave us the nickname team chunky, my partner Liz, embraced it, while I wasn't too happy with it
We were the very first game and Beth made a point of attacking me, serving it to me, spiking it at me, the amount of times I was in the sand looking up to see Beth and the guy hugging or giving an ass slap...it was a lot of times.
Beth even blocked the two times I tried to spike it after Liz managed to give a decent set. I was pretty thoroughly emasculated by the time it was over. But that was the worst of it, I guess, and of course we lost all the rest of the games pretty badly, I played ok, but Liz really was useless, while Beth's team won the championship.
I feared what was going to happen. At first, she made me get down on my knees and kiss her feet, while Liz kissed his, Mark, then she made me take off my swimsuit and present it to her and spin around for all to see, and Liz did the same.
Thankfully, at that point a few people had arrived back, they had driven into the nearest town and got a ton of pizzas, wings, ribs, a lot of stuff. So everyone swarmed to them and the drinks started flowing fast too.
Beth's first decree was that she had 3 male servants and Mark would get 3 female, at first their jobs were to get them food and drinks and hand feed them. Beth loved all that food, so she had each one had some pizza, ribs or wings and she'd call out for whatever she wanted next and they had to hand feed her.
Mark noticed that someone had brought real nice reclining beach chairs and ordered them commandeered for the night's king and queen.
Beth had plenty of volunteers to be her slave for the evening, even if that meant just feeding her, or fetching or things or as the night went on, being her footstool. On one hand, it kind of made me feel better, less whipped, I guess, that other guys were so eager to take on that role, and that maybe I was in a better place than I thought, maybe I was feeling too sorry for myself about Beth's demands in our relationship.
On the other hand it was evidence that Beth was right, about how lucky I was and how other guys would line up to do just a little of what I get to do to her.
Beth really loved this, she made everyone call her "Your Majesty." She demanded massages. If her slaves made any mistakes, like spilling beer or some food, she'd have them get naked and crawl through a gauntlet of girls who spanked them as they passed. Later on, she was making girls give guys shots from glass in between their tits, and to my satisfaction, she didn't take part.
Later on, when everyone was pretty wasted, Beth got everyone gathered around and she called me to her.
- COMMENTS
joela_99yover 2 years agoThis chapter was okay, not my favorite of these stories..
But as i mentioned in my comment on Ch. 09, he refers to being peed on, but it is not in this chapter or the next?
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI guess you responded to my comment on love in domination.
Let me exlplian to you why love is irrelevant when it comes to a story that is femdom and fiction.
All femdom fiction do not have to have the same style and mode of domination. As I am sure you are aware, the are plenty great femdom works out there with characters that are spouses and the bases of the domination ranging from, hatful revenge to plain sadistic tendencies to a sort of loving control. Does the nature of the relationship of the characters take away from quality or erotism of the story? No it does not. Like you said, it all depends on taste and what you like to read. I like all good femdom works, regardless of if its a loving couple or a deranged pysco chick and a male prey. Where is it decreed that spouses in femdom must love each other?
Its fiction! So again, love is irrelevant in femdom fiction or any fiction for that matter. If you want the lovey femom story, write one and if its a good read we will give you 4 stars because it was a good and erotic read, not because it had characters who loved them self. You are welcome.
onyourkneesalmost 11 years agoAuthorThanks for the feedback everyone, it's always fun for me to read, it's been great that even the negative feedback on this story has been well though out with fair points instead of just "This sucks" and the characters are drawing strong reactions, so it's all been good.
I wrote this story because I wanted to try something where the sub is as powerless as possible without being actually physically restrained, or blackmailed or something - mentally trapped, I guess. I've written most of my other sub stuff where they were consenting and enjoying it, I just wanted to do a different angle. I also liked the paradox of how he puts up with her primarily because she's beautiful and sexy, despite her withholding that aspect from him to an extreme degree.
But I think she absolutely cares for him, I mention that outside of their sex life, they get along great, just for sex, she is completely selfish and doesn't care about what he wants.
About whether she loves him or not, I think it depends on if you think "highly conditional" love is real love. She does abuse him, obviously, but sadly, I don't think love and abuse are mutually exclusive in all relationships, real or fiction.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe question about her loving him is valid, as it is generally accepted that most spouses have some kind/degree of love for the other, and she has said (in the past anyway) that she loves/cares for him. There is nothing in her behavior that indicates any care for him. If there had never been a pretense that she cared there would probably be less of an issue. There is not a D/s power exchange here. Exchange implies each recieves something,even if it is not equal. Some of us see nothing he is getting from this situation. She is showing no care for him or his safety/needs. It is all take. And many of us define that as abusive. To want us to accept/condone this is to want us to call a duck a cow. Can't do that, and if I did, it still would not make it so. If you enjoy this and want to even harder on him, well power to you. Folks who don't like it are free to keep reading. Maybe just to stick it out. Maybe to watch the train wreck. Maybe hoping it will change.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI agree! Great femdom story, style and comtent.
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I don't understand the people posting negative comments about she does love him, what does that have to do with the story, I mean you know what your reading right?Those comments seem pretty silly to me.
Again, great read, hot and exelent style. Looking forward to more from you.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThanks - These are great!
I would like to read about another physical confrontation... Perhaps they actually get into a fight and she dominates... beats him up.
