All Comments on 'Hey Needle Dick!'

Good job,hope there's gonna be a part two to this?Gotta know if he finally gets to nail her ass or not!

hell. God knows what diseases the slag has. All he had to do to shut her up was tell her mom about the guys she fucks in her room. Get her ass thrown out of the house. Dumb as shit to fuck the community cum dump.

You made her out as the cum bucket that she really is. She showed her true colors. If I were Trevor, I would not face or pussy fuck her, she might have an STD that in incurable. I would much rather see a couple of big, and I mean big dogs take her and make her their bitch. Turn the foul mouth bitch into a dog's bitch. Let a male dog tie with her and fill her with dog cum. All the time, let Trev record it and use it as blackmail against the little 5'2" bitch. You never know, she might like a dog's cock in her.

She sounds like she has been after him all along. Thanks for the story........Rich

Pretty good first story. Love how you ended it leaving readers wondering/wanting what will happen next.

Obviously you love to leave your stories kind of "unfinished" as both of your stories I've read are great and almost beg for more... Keep on writing your stuff and fill us with the things that happened later...

total bullshit story no guy would put up with a step sister like that he would either stay out untill bed time and leave as soon as he got up or find a way to move out also there is no way they would go from fighting to sex that quickly keep it realistic and stop trying to rewrite human nature

Again, I don't get people who come her expecting truth out of fiction. If you as a person do not know how to expand your imagination, then blame yourself, not the writer!

This story was fun and that was cool how he just whipped it out for her. So much for him having a needle dick.

You totally have to make a part two to this story. I would love to see how far little step sis will push Trevor next time!

fiction has to be believable and atleast sound realistic if it doesn't then it is fantacy and there is a seo=perate area for that so stop putting fantacy stories in the incest area there is no way this would ever happen only in your imagination

you need to finish the story

You have the brains to write fantastic stories but have let yourself down here

is good but write the rest