All Comments on 'Hierarchy'

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

A nice piece of work, exceedingly erotic with a very well developed tension between the characters.

Well done.

Definitely not what I had expected, but very nice work. Thank you.

FtF

This was a hot story. I loved the battle between them, and the descriptions of him entering her. Delicious story, thanks. Cathy

by a terrifically skilled writer. I love the way the backstory is melded so gracefully into the action. The language is deft and gorgeous, and conveys not only the searing action but the emotions and sensations that go with it. Love the atmosphere too.

This is deep sex: sex that's about more than just screwing. Very nicely done.