All Comments on 'High School Scat Loves Ch. 02'

FUCKING GREAT STORY, oh how I hope there will be another installment. This GREAT STORY reallymade my day!Eatandbemerry69

where the fuck do u find these girls ? i would love a couple of girls who would share with me there bodily fluids. what a great story. cant wait for chapter 3.

Delete this.

LUCKY bastard getting TWO girls to go on him

I'm not trying to insult the story but it's written unnaturally. The characters feel more like puppets go write a story about sex than actual characters and as someone who needs personality for attraction its honestly hard to read. Again, not trying to insult the story as Im sure you might not be trying to be an amazing writer, but maybe read some stuff on how to write characters to feel like real people.