All Comments on 'Highland Fling'

You've done a great job with this story, especially in your description of the couple in the sauna. However, I'd be wary of trying to incorporate dialectical variations of English into your writing as thoroughly as you've done. A word here and there is all it takes. Scotsman69 is Scottish and most of his stories are set in Scotland. It might be good to take a look at the way in which he depicts through a word or two, the nuances of Scottish English without going overboard.

The story is excellent in its conception and assuredly and carefully written however. It's arousing and most enjoyable.