All Comments on 'Highland Magic Ch. 11'

I am glad to see you are back! Excellent chapter, as usual. I can't wait for the next one.

I'm so happy to see you submitting again. And i'm so glad this story is not over. I love your work and eagerly anticipate the next!

Hi, loved how the story is coming up. I am hooked, please do continue soon. Can't wait to read more

...damn jealous of the way you weave a scene!

I love your story. However, it could use more editing (in all the chapters I have read so far) with spelling and grammar. Also, a score, in reference to numbers, is 20, not 30. When Cien said "A score and one" that would make him 21 years old, not 31. Otherwise, great job!

Just a quick fyi, I didn't know if you intended Regan to mistake what a "score" actually meant, or if it is a factual error. A score is actually 20; that would make Cien 21, not 31.