All Comments on 'Him Ch. 03'

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Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Mirageabout 20 years ago
An Explosion of Talent

This story took all the potential developed from the first two chapters and, for lack of a better word, exploded. This was very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very nice

I hope to read more on this *smiles* very well done i might add.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

This is a great story. I can't wait for more.

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