All Comments on 'His Pet'

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KwingKwingalmost 14 years ago
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I like that you went into the submissive's sensations more, but I feel like it was too focused on just the vaginal intercourse. It seemed so black and white to me, not describing the cold feel of the table she was being fucked on, or how her breasts may have jiggled, or how her back may have arched, etc.

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